"The Internal Life"

[~*D@NnY*~]

OK, I am interested in writing songs, and I had a go at my first today, so forgive me if it is not that good Bascially, I just wrote based on how I feel at times, so however they are, it's just based on me a little.


I look out my window, and glance at the Sky.
Thinking back at things that I've felt and seen before.
I hoped things were different,
I know thats not to be.
Oh but my heart is still tearing, just like I couldn't breath...

'Oh don't you know, at times I feel so lost,
Neglected and blocked from my life, like I have no choice,
And I know, things are different,
Then what they seem to be.
Though I can't help at times, to think that, I am just not meant to be.

I get twisted around, and thrown,my feelings start to feel.
Am I really that strong and am I able, to fight? (to fight)

ooowohowooooo.....

The feelings are internal, it just clings to me.
The longer I fight it it will stay, so I guess its a part of meee...

Oh don't you know, at times I feel so lost.
Neglected and blocked form the world,
Just like I wasn't born.
I know things are different, then what they seem to be.
Though I can't help at times, to think,
It's just not meant to be.

Ohhh Issues we had....Isuuses we have,
Who asks to have them, is it you or me? (or meeee)
I know that we can never change, and what will be will be.

Oh don't you know, at times I feel so lost.
Neglected and blocked form my life, like I have no choice.
I know things are different, then what they seem to be,
Ohh I'll fight it off and conquer it, and I will live to be freeee-ooohaaa

Chorus again, fades.

[Neil]

Omg that was absolotly brilliant

[Babs]

soz 4 not replying earlier mate, but this song is great dude! share more,lol. u should put some music 2 it and stuff. it's really kool

[~*D@NnY*~]

Thanks Babs, I'm glad that they are OK. And yes, I will be writing more. I have a strong ambition to be a Rock singer, I am practising singing all the time. And I am practising with lyrics, to get the feel, to get used to it all. I will write some up and put on here again soon.

[muncher]

yo dan the man that was gr8 plz post more u know u want 2

[pain]

Nice Song!

[~*D@NnY*~]

Thanks you allot guys. It sure gives me confidence. I'm gonna try and post something up tonight if I can. Thanks again guys, I really apprecaite it.

[muncher]

no problem cous

[MuchHate]

Don't seem to 'Rocky' if there was music maybe but I wouldn't listen to it.

[~*D@NnY*~]

Well there are different kinds of rock, and I am only practising and particulary in that song, putting my feelings into what I was writing, and I would put it under rock, because that is the main sort I am into. Your into Metal, so no I don't suppose you would listen to it.

[Steve]

Sounds like a banging tune homie.

[Numinous]

Not bad for your first try but you need more feeling in it and more descriptive words.